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typo's in MFN first edition
« on: September 04, 2009, 04:32:29 AM »
Finished reading a couple days ago - enjoyed very much! (and thanks for the signing! :) )

Did find a few very minor issues as i was reading - mostly typo's, but there was one spot that looked like it was missing a word or two. Will have to try to find it again so i can let you know what page it is on...

So when is the next installment due out??? soon I hope. I hate waiting!! LOL
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Re: typo's in MFN first edition
« Reply #1 on: September 04, 2009, 07:49:22 AM »
ok - will list typo's as I can find them - page # & quoted text from book first w/error/typo in bold, then suggestions for correcting if needed...


pg 14 - "Jake bore down on Alec, his hazel eyes filled with the anger Alec had never seen before"

lose the word "the" so it reads '...his hazel eyes filled with anger Alec had never seen before...' - or possibly '...his hazel eyes filled with an anger Alec had never...'

more to come later...
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Re: typo's in MFN first edition
« Reply #2 on: September 04, 2009, 08:22:24 AM »
pg 149 - Eizo speaking - "He wants to me?"

something missing here??? ;)
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Re: typo's in MFN first edition
« Reply #3 on: September 04, 2009, 08:24:21 AM »
pg 173 - Alec speaking to Beetle - "Get us out of her safely..."

should be 'here'?
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Re: typo's in MFN first edition
« Reply #4 on: September 06, 2009, 05:41:33 AM »
a small section that reads oddly...

pg 27 - 2nd full paragraph, midway thru...
"The garage door eased down toward the cement flooring, cutting off the light from outside to the dirt coated windows scarce on the other three walls."   possible change: 'cutting off the light from outside to the scant amount coming through the dirt coated windows that were scarce on the other three walls.'

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